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Character: Titus Rosera 8D
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (nyuk nyuk nyuk, he has no hair xD)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[x] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (well, he didn't help his dying mother, so...)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (...what? Oo')
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (well, he's astraphobic...)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient (Though I really doubt if this is one of Mary Sue traits ._.)
[ ] They are from a long line of (Kekkai genkai: Kouchu)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 10
Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[x] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[x] They are emotionless
Final score: 6
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 < Mary-Sue
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Character: Titus Rosera 8D
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (nyuk nyuk nyuk, he has no hair xD)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[x] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (well, he didn't help his dying mother, so...)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (...what? Oo')
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (well, he's astraphobic...)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient (Though I really doubt if this is one of Mary Sue traits ._.)
[ ] They are from a long line of (Kekkai genkai: Kouchu)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 10
Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[x] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[x] They are emotionless
Final score: 6
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 < Mary-Sue
Kradziony taaag, fak je!
Soł! Lec goł!
[x] Masz chłopaka/dziewczynę
[x] Masz swój pokój.
[x] Masz swoją komórkę.
[x] Masz Ipoda albo MP3
[x] Oboje rodziców jest dalej ze soba w zwiazku.
[x] Masz wiecej niz dwóch najlepszych przyjaciół.
[ ] Masz własny basen.
w sumie 6
[x] Ubierasz sie jak chcesz.
[ ] Wychodzisz ze znajomymi wiecej niz raz w tygodniu.
[x] Masz kompa w swoim pokoju.
[ ] Nigdy nie zostałes pokonany.
[ ] Nigdy nie płakałes czesciej niz dwa razy na miesiąc.
[x] Słuchasz tej muzyki jaką lubisz.
[x] Masz wystarczajaco duzy pokój dla sieb
Nju tag. Kradziony, jak zwykle.
1. Gdybym była kolorem, byłabym: ciemną czerwienią.
2. Gdybym była imieniem, byłabym: Uh. Agatą?
3. Gdybym była kwiatem/rośliną, byłabym: tulipanem. Czerwonym. Z czarnym środkiem.
4. Gdybym była drzewem, byłabym: leszczyną. Uj z tym...
6. Gdybym była porą roku, byłabym: latem.
7. Gdybym była miesiącem, byłabym: czerwcem.
8. Gdybym była dniem tygodnia, byłabym: środą.
9. Gdybym była zjawiskiem atmosferycznym, byłabym: uh, mżawką w czasie słonecznego dnia?
10. Gdybym była słowem
Ej... Co si chrzani z dA...?
Czy wam też nie wyświetla WIĘKSZOŚCI komentarzy przy waszych pracach, i zaznacza 0 favów, czy to tylko mi się coś pieprzy? O_o
EDIT: O, już jest okej! ^^
Tag khaelowy... odbity
Od !khaelv (https://www.deviantart.com/khaelv).
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What would you do if.....
1. I died: ...Nie wiem... :<
2. I kissed you: Oddałabym.
3. I lived next door to you: Będziesz w końcu mieszkać ze mną ;)
4. I started smoking: Wepchałabym ci pieprz w papierosy. Albo papierosy w tyłek.
5. I stole something: Bym się martwiła...
6. I was hospitalized: Bałabym się.
7. I ran away from home: Ścigałabym cię!
8. I got into a fight and you weren't there: Oj. To byłby wkurw z mojej strony. Czemu się bijesz, czemu ciebie biją, i w ogóle. I "przecinki" by się sypały...
WHAT DO Y
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Musiałaś zrobić, bo KL cię męczył, że to merysójka. I know. Cx