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Character: Titus Rosera 8D

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (nyuk nyuk nyuk, he has no hair xD)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[x] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (well, he didn't help his dying mother, so...)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood  (...what? Oo')
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (well, he's astraphobic...)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient (Though I really doubt if this is one of Mary Sue traits ._.)
[ ] They are from a long line of (Kekkai genkai: Kouchu)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 10

Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[x] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[x] They are emotionless

Final score: 6

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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue
  • Mood: Depressed
  • Listening to: &quot;Resonance&quot; from Soul Eater
  • Reading: farmakologia...
  • Watching: Nostalgia Critic, MLP: FiM
  • Playing: Ghost Master
  • Drinking: soczek &quot;Karotka&quot;

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HileyCaine Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Inna koleżanka mi znalazła stronę. Prosz - mspfanventures.com/?s=4455
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pasztetgnida Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Ooo, fajnie, przejrze sobię :D Dzieki.
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HileyCaine Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spoko
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RedLabRat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dzięki za łocza <3
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Silver1bow Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Happy Birthday! :huggle:
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pasztetgnida Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Thank you :D
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LadyMilka Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Wszystkiego najlepszego~! Życzę Ci dużo zdrowia, szczęścia, weny twórczej, wolnego czasu, prezentów, pieniędzy, spełnienia marzeń i pysznego tortu~! :heart::party:Hug Have your cake and eat it too :heart:
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pasztetgnida Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Dziękuję :D
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LadyMilka Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Ależ nie ma za co~! :aww:
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RedLabRat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wszystkiego najlepszego!!!!! ^ ^ 
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